One possible version: My ideal school starts at 8:30a.m.So I can sleep more. Classes are over at 3:30p.m. I have more time to do after—school activities. The classrooms are big and bright. The teachers are very kind to us. The students are friendly and helpful to each other. We only have half an hour of homework every day. We can have enough time for our hobbies. We have three PE lessons and my favourite sport is playing basketball. There is a park on one side of our school and a big shopping mall on the other. We can go to play in the park and go shopping at weekends. Every month we go on a school trip to a big city.
试题分析：本文是篇材料作文，材料非常简单，学生很容易把握写作要求和写作目的。考生在写作之前必须认真审题，首先要注意文章的时态，要求自己理想的学校。应该用一般现在时。人称用第一人称或学生们。注意认真阅读材料，分析英语的正确表达和句子之间的衔接。 【亮点说明】 本文做到了包含所有内容要点，语句通顺，标点符号运用正确。还运用了have more time to do ; go shopping；动词的-ing形式做表语等等。并注意了句子开头的变化和的衔接如： so等等。
