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在阳光雨露里,我已长高、长壮,但这还不是全部,长大还应包括什么?是关心、帮助同学?是体贴、理解父母?是感恩、回报亲朋师长?还是……,成长的点点滴滴,久久不能忘记。请以I Am Not a Child Any More为题,记叙你在学习生活中经历的一件或两件事,表明你已经不再是一个下孩子。 要求:1.请根据所给题目,用英语写一篇短文,不少于80词; 2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁; 3.文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计算 I am not a child any more |
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I am not a child any more I have changed a lot during the past three years. I used to be weak and short. But now, I am strong and as tall as my father. The most important thing is that I have learned to care about others. It was a Wednesday evening. When I went back home, no one was in. So I cooked the meal. I didn’t know my mother was ill until my parents came back from the hospital. They both said the meal was very delicious, although it tasted salty. At bedtime, I fetched hot water for my mother to wash feet. My mother said, “Dear, you are really grown up.” It was the first time that I had realized I was not a child any more. |
试题分析: 考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题,确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。本篇短文涉及了过去和现在的改变,从各个方面能感受到作者不再是一个孩子了,已经长大了可以为父母做点事情了。文中用到了一般过去式。温馨提醒:考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等。 【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,不仅介绍了作者自己和小时候的变化,还从实际行动中表明自己不再是一个孩子了,文中用到了一些固定句型The most important thing is that I have learned to care about others;It was the first time that I had realized I was not a child any more.这些句子给文章增色不少。 |
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