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题文
根据图片及中文大意，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的短文，谈谈感想。
一首《时间都去哪儿了》引发了无数人的深思。习主席，网友们眼中的习大人，说自己的时间大都用在工作上了，稍有时间还要进行阅读，有时还要运动、陪伴家人等。你对此有何感慨？你的时间都去哪儿了？未来你的计划和打算是什么？What do you think about the time? How did you spend the time in the past? What’s your wish for future?  
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题型：写作题 难度：中档
答案
One possible version：
The song Where did the time go ,caused countless thinking of the people. The Chairman Xi, the Minister Xi in the eyes of internet users,said that he spent most of his time on the work,and that he would do some reading if he had a little time, and that sometimes he did sports and accompanied his family and so on. From the Chairman Xi, I have learned that time is precious ,when it is gone, it will never come back. I should make full use of time to work hard.In the past I wasted a lot of time playing computer games. I wish to spare every minute to study and read books in the future. |
试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，通过介绍习主席的时间安排来写出自己的感受和未来你的计划。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般过去时和一般将来时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如： he spent.......；he would do.......；I have learned that......及 I should make .......等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头《时间都去哪了》这首歌引发了人们无数的思考，接下来习主席的时间安排，最后介绍自己的感受和对未来的计划。此处用了 spent most of his time on ，did sports，make full use of time，I wasted a lot of time playing， in the future等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。 |
据专家权威分析，试题“根据图片及中文大意，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的短文..”主要考查你对 提纲作文 等考点的理解。关于这些考点的“档案”如下：
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