An amazing animal---goldfish Goldfish are a cute and amazing animal.Most of the children like them.They can’t live without water. They need to sleep. They are asleep with their eyes open.Some of them usually sleep in the daytime.Others like sleeping at night.They can’t eat too much at a time.It is said that they can remember things only for three seconds.Also we must keep the water clean.
试题分析：本文是叙述的关于金鱼的生活习惯的问题，所以句子的时态应该用一般现在时。应该尽量包括文中提示的内容，可稍加拓展。内容上应注意描述的全面性，语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，句子应该符合英语的表达习惯，适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。 【亮点说明】短文用了一些短语和句式，增加了文章的色彩，如：Others like sleeping at night.They can’t eat too much at a time.It is said that they can remember things only for three seconds.Also we must keep the water clean.等。文中用了with的复合结构，如：They are asleep with their eyes open。增加了短文的亮点，提醒学生平时积累一些短语和句式，以便用在写作中。
