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随着我们长大,和家人围坐在一起吃饭的时间越来越少。然而有研究表明,跟家人一起吃饭有助于身体健康。对此你有何看法?你又是如何做的?请以Eating with parents makes you healthier为题写一篇80词左右的短文,陈述你的理由。 Eating with parents makes you healthier |
题型:写作题 难度:中档
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Eating with parents makes you healthier I believe eating with parents will make teenagers healthier. First, as we know, a happy mood keeps people healthy. Talking more with parents is a better way of helping solve problems in our daily life. The dinner time is just a chance for communication. Also, home-made meals are healthier for us to eat, for the food problem seems more and more serious now. As for me, I have dinner with my parents every day. My family all think the time for dinner is the most important moment for each of us. |
试题分析:考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题,并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时,首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型,在你的能力范围之内,选择句式时要赋予变化,因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词,把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体,在发表个人观点的时候,可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采,也能增加得高分的可能性。 【亮点说明】范文提到一些起常用短语As for关于; make teenagers healthier 使人们更健康。First, as we know, a happy mood keeps people healthy这句话中as引导非限制性定语从句,代指后面这件事。Talking more with parents is a better way of helping solve problems in our daily life.这句话中动名词做主语,a way of doing做某事的一种方式。My family all think the time for dinner is the most important moment for each of us.这句话中体现形容词最高级。 |
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