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假如你是林平，你的笔友Sally正在美国的一所学校学习汉语，她给你发了一个电子邮件。请根据其内容，给予回复。邮件的开头及结尾均已给出（不计入总词数）。 要求：1. 词数80左右。 2. 条理清楚，语意连贯，句式规范。 参考词汇： listening ability（能力）, spoken Chinese, radio, TV programs, video tapes From:  Sally To:    Lin Ping Subject: Asking for help Dear Lin Ping, How are you getting on? Thanks for telling me something about your school life. I’m glad you’re doing well in your English study. As you know, I began to learn Chinese 2 years ago. Now let me tell you something about my Chinese study. Though I can read and write a little Chinese, I’m still weak in listening and my spoken Chinese isn’t improving. I find it hard to talk with the people around in Chinese. Could you give me some advice? How I wish I could talk to you in Chinese one day! Hope to hear from you soon. Yours, Sally From: Lin Ping To:   Sally Subject: Re: Asking for help Dear Sally, Glad to hear from you. You say you have some problems in learning Chinese. Don’t worry. __________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ I hope you will make great progress in your Chinese study. Good luck! Yours, Lin Ping

题型：写作题  难度：中档

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From: Lin Ping To:   Sally Subject: Re: Asking for help Dear Sally, Glad to hear from you. You say you have some problems in learning Chinese. Don’t worry. Let me give you some advice. If you want to improve your listening ability, you’d better listen to the tapes and radio programs in Chinese. You can watch the Chinese TV programs, video tapes or films. I think they are helpful. As for your spoken Chinese, I think it’s good to read aloud in the morning. When you meet a Chinese, you may go up and try to have a talk with him if possible. I’m sure the more you practise listening and speaking, the better you’ll do in them. I hope you will make great progress in your Chinese study. Good luck! Yours, Lin Ping

试题分析: 这是一篇应用文写作，写一封回信。本题材料主要是一封来信，故动笔前一定要认真阅读来信。在回信中对涉及的问题都要有所回应。根据内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，人称主要为一般现在时态。写作中注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 点评：注意写作中的时态、人称和数的问题，时态一般是一般现在时态，人称是第一人称较多。写作中语言要准确、简明，说明有条理，符合逻辑。

据专家权威分析，试题“假如你是林平，你的笔友Sally正在美国的一所学校学习汉语，她给你..”主要考查你对  小作文  等考点的理解。关于这些考点的“档案”如下：

小作文

考点名称：小作文

• 小作文：
  多指便条、请假条等，在写作的时候要注意文章的格式（称呼、正文、签名、日期）。

• 初中便条、请假条格式：
  一、便条
  1. 便条一般指简洁的书面留言，常用于朋友、同事或家庭成员之间，内容包括：提供信息、安排活动、表示抱歉、提出要求或咨询等。
  邀请发言、请假条也属便条之列。行文用词简洁明了、目的明确。
  2. 便条内容简单明了。不写与要转达的口信无关的内容。同学们经常易犯这方面的错误，写一些多余的话。
  3. 格式与书信类似，但是称呼只写对话的名字，不必加客套词 dear 之类，除非对年长者。结尾只签自己的名字或称谓。
  4. 经常用简略句。省去主语、宾语、助动词等。
  如： Thanks for the repair. Back at 8 p. m. Not milk today. Called round to see if you could come out tonight， but no one in. 不注重文字的推敲、句子的顺序，也不拘于写作形式。

  二、请假条：
  1、要求:开门见山，内容简短，用词通俗
  2、写请假条的时间一般位于右上角。
  3、称呼写在日期下一行的左上角。一般以Dear开头。
  4、正文简洁明了。只需把请假的理由和请假时间说清楚即可。
  5、为说明请假事由是真实的，要在正文后另起一行写上：I enclose a doctor’s certificate. (我附上了医生证明。）
  6、署名写在右下角。名字上一行写上Yours，或Your student, 或Yours sincerely 等。