题文

假如你是Tommy，你的朋友Jack给你来信，抱怨他的父母对他管得太严格了，请你结合自己家庭的情况，给他写一封回信，让Jack明白每个家庭都有家规，家规其实是父母对子女的爱护。 写作提示： 你家里有哪些家规（至少三点）。 你对这些家规的看法。 你对Jack 的建议。 要求：1. 必须包括提示内容，可以适当发挥； 2. 词数：80左右（文章的开头已给出，不计入词数）； 3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Dear Jack, In your last letter you complained that your parents were too strict with you. Actually every family has its rules ______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Tommy

题型：写作题  难度：中档

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Dear Jack, In your last letter you complained that your parents were too strict with you. Actually every family has its rules. So does mine. Let me tell you some rules of my family. First, my parents stop me from watching TV on weekdays. It allow me have more time to do with my study as well as to do some outdoor activities. Second, they only allow me to play computer games for two hours at weekends. I agree that playing too much computer games is bad for us because we are easily addicted to it .Third, they ask me to do some housework at home, such as cleaning the floor, washing dishes after meals. In fact I agree that it is good to share housework with our parents and I enjoy doing housework.  I think you could discuss your family rules with your parents and make the family rules together with them. As the saying goes: nothing can be accomplished without norms and standards. As a child, we should obey the rules in schools as well as at home. I believe that the rules will lead us to have a healthy and meaningful life. Yours, Tommy

试题分析: 这是一篇应用文写作，写一封回信。本题给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，确定写作内容，并适当发挥。根据内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态和将来时态，写作中注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 点评：注意写作中的时态、人称和数的问题，时态一般是一般现在时态，人称是第一人称较多。写作中语言要准确、简明，说明有条理，符合逻辑。

据专家权威分析，试题“假如你是Tommy，你的朋友Jack给你来信，抱怨他的父母对他管得太严..”主要考查你对  小作文  等考点的理解。关于这些考点的“档案”如下：

小作文

考点名称：小作文

• 小作文：
  多指便条、请假条等，在写作的时候要注意文章的格式（称呼、正文、签名、日期）。

• 初中便条、请假条格式：
  一、便条
  1. 便条一般指简洁的书面留言，常用于朋友、同事或家庭成员之间，内容包括：提供信息、安排活动、表示抱歉、提出要求或咨询等。
  邀请发言、请假条也属便条之列。行文用词简洁明了、目的明确。
  2. 便条内容简单明了。不写与要转达的口信无关的内容。同学们经常易犯这方面的错误，写一些多余的话。
  3. 格式与书信类似，但是称呼只写对话的名字，不必加客套词 dear 之类，除非对年长者。结尾只签自己的名字或称谓。
  4. 经常用简略句。省去主语、宾语、助动词等。
  如： Thanks for the repair. Back at 8 p. m. Not milk today. Called round to see if you could come out tonight， but no one in. 不注重文字的推敲、句子的顺序，也不拘于写作形式。

  二、请假条：
  1、要求:开门见山，内容简短，用词通俗
  2、写请假条的时间一般位于右上角。
  3、称呼写在日期下一行的左上角。一般以Dear开头。
  4、正文简洁明了。只需把请假的理由和请假时间说清楚即可。
  5、为说明请假事由是真实的，要在正文后另起一行写上：I enclose a doctor’s certificate. (我附上了医生证明。）
  6、署名写在右下角。名字上一行写上Yours，或Your student, 或Yours sincerely 等。