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根据要求完成大作文，（共15分） 以下是张军的英国笔友David 发给他的电子邮件，请阅读邮件并根据其内容以张军的名义写一封回信。 （60---80词） Dear Zhang, How are you ? I ‘m very happy to tell you that I have got a wonderful May Day. I climbed the beautiful mountain with my friends. When I got to the top of it, I felt that I was so great. What did you do on May Day? How did you like it? I’m waiting for your e-mail. David

题型：写作题  难度：中档

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Dear David How are you ? I am happy to revieve your letter. I know about your May Day. Now ,let me tell you something about my holiday. Last  Sunday I went to the park with my classmates ,we met at the school gate at  eight o'clock in the morning ,then we rode bikes to the park ,it took us about  half an hour to get there.when we got there ,there  were too many people in the park ,but  the park was  very  beautiful ,we  saw many beautiful flowers ,first we decided to  go boating on the lake ,the water was clear  ,we could see ourselves in the water ,after that we played hide-and -seek game ,it was really funny , suddenly we met  some foreigners ,they were from America ,we said hello to them and talked a lot with them about China ,and we introduced many  famous places of interest ,they were quite satisfied with our intriduction and they said :thank you ,at last we took some photos with them , at noon,we had a picnic in the park ,in the afternoon we returned to school ,though tired we felt  happy! yours Zhang

试题分析：这是一篇应用文。要用表示收到信件和表示近况的语言，对五一活动的描述，对五一假期的感受。主要是第一人称和过去时态。 【亮点说明】这篇书信应用文格式正确，内容表达清晰，过渡自然。在描写五一假期如何度过时连词的运用使文章更有逻辑性，也更吸引人。如then， first ，after that， suddenly ，at last ，at noon ，though等。

据专家权威分析，试题“根据要求完成大作文，（共15分）以下是张军的英国笔友David发给他的..”主要考查你对  小作文  等考点的理解。关于这些考点的“档案”如下：

小作文

考点名称：小作文

• 小作文：
  多指便条、请假条等，在写作的时候要注意文章的格式（称呼、正文、签名、日期）。

• 初中便条、请假条格式：
  一、便条
  1. 便条一般指简洁的书面留言，常用于朋友、同事或家庭成员之间，内容包括：提供信息、安排活动、表示抱歉、提出要求或咨询等。
  邀请发言、请假条也属便条之列。行文用词简洁明了、目的明确。
  2. 便条内容简单明了。不写与要转达的口信无关的内容。同学们经常易犯这方面的错误，写一些多余的话。
  3. 格式与书信类似，但是称呼只写对话的名字，不必加客套词 dear 之类，除非对年长者。结尾只签自己的名字或称谓。
  4. 经常用简略句。省去主语、宾语、助动词等。
  如： Thanks for the repair. Back at 8 p. m. Not milk today. Called round to see if you could come out tonight， but no one in. 不注重文字的推敲、句子的顺序，也不拘于写作形式。

  二、请假条：
  1、要求:开门见山，内容简短，用词通俗
  2、写请假条的时间一般位于右上角。
  3、称呼写在日期下一行的左上角。一般以Dear开头。
  4、正文简洁明了。只需把请假的理由和请假时间说清楚即可。
  5、为说明请假事由是真实的，要在正文后另起一行写上：I enclose a doctor’s certificate. (我附上了医生证明。）
  6、署名写在右下角。名字上一行写上Yours，或Your student, 或Yours sincerely 等。