题文

书面表达。

请根据图画写一篇关于汤姆假期打工经历的短文。 要求： 1. 词数在80-100个左右。             2. 把图中所示内容表达完整，条理清晰，意思连贯。             3. 开头部分已经给出，不计入总词数。

One day in the summer holiday , Tom found a waiter was needed in a bar . He felt interested in the job and went for an interview . Tom was taken on and started working in the bar .

题型：写作题  难度：偏难

答案

One day in the summer holiday , Tom found a waiter was needed in a bar . He felt interested in the job and went for an interview . Tom was taken on and started working in the bar .         A few days after Tom got the job , a young man came to the bar with his girlfriend . They ordered some drinks and talked happily at the table .         They stayed for a long time , enjoying themselves .         After the bar was closed , Tom began to do the cleaning . Suddenly he found a wallet under the table at which the man his girlfriend had sat . He opened it and found , to his surprise , lots of money . Tom telephoned the police station and told them about it . The young man and the woman were found and they came back to the bar . They were very thankful to Tom , who was also very happy because he had helped others .                                                                                                                                         答案不唯一

据专家权威分析，试题“书面表达。请根据图画写一篇关于汤姆假期打工经历的短文。要求： ..”主要考查你对  图画作文  等考点的理解。关于这些考点的“档案”如下：

图画作文

考点名称：图画作文

• 图画作文：
  就是根据给出的一幅或几幅图画所提供的信息写短文。此类题的体裁较广泛，可以是记叙文、说明文，也可以是议论文。

• 图画作文的注意事项：
  1. 认真读图，把握中心。
  一般说来，所给的几幅图都是围绕一个中心展开的。它们讲述的通常是一个小故事或小事件，这个小故事或小事件就是这组图画所要表达的中心。
  2. 初步构思，考虑用词、短语、句型和时态。
  在把握了文章的中心后，应在内心构思一个基本的框架，并考虑使用恰当的词语、短语和句型，以充分地表达文章的内容。
  尽可能地充分利用所学的短语或句型来表述具体的内容。这是体现自身能力的重要一环。
  3. 连词成句，然后再连句成文。
  运用适当的单词或短语正确表达各图的意思。然后再将各图的单个句子串连起来。
  串连时，要注意使用适当的连接词语或过渡性语句，不至于让读者觉得文章中出现跳跃现象，更使上下文更为紧凑、自然。
  4. 反复审核，修改错误。
  一篇文章写好后，应进行检查，看短文中是否有错，如拼写、用词、时态、语态及表达方面的错误。
  5. 宜详则详，该略则略。
  对于一些细节方面的内容，如果是文章必不可少的，在写作过程中是不可将其忽略的。
  如果是可有可无的细节，则可视具体情况进行增删。据此，我们在读图时一定要注意阅读各图中的一些细节内容，看其是否影响文章的内容。
  6. 注意所给的汉语提示。
  一般说来，看图写话中的汉语提示往往给定了有关的时间、地点、人物等相关的信息，有的还规定了文章所采用的体裁，如使用书信、留言、日记等。因此，在审题时我们一定要注意所给的汉语提示。