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阳光英语杂志征稿，要求根据下列提示信息写一篇80词左右的旅游方面的文章，文章的标题及开头已给出。 1. 旅游是一种非常好的活动。当你工作累了，有空的时候，到外地欣赏自然。可呼吸新鲜空气，可交友，忘记疲劳，有益健康； 2. 旅游有时很麻烦。天气多变。小偷偷钱也是常事。 3. 旅游时应做充分准备，需了解天气情况。有朋友在一起，可相互照顾；小心不要出事故。 Travelling Most of the people like travelling because it is a very good outdoor activity. We may enjoy the____________________________  ____________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________

题型：写作题  难度：中档

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Traveling Traveling is a very good activity. When you get tired of your work or study, and when you have free time, you can go to a beautiful place to enjoy the beauty of nature or other cities. You can breathe fresh air, meet different people and make friends with them. It’s good for your health to do so. But sometimes, traveling is not an enjoyable thing. For example, the weather can be changeable. There may be rain when you travel. You may catch a cold or be ill while traveling. The worst thing is that the thieves may steal your money. All these may happen to a tourist. When you go on a trip, you must get everything ready. Firstly, you must have clear information about the weather. Secondly, ask a friend to go with you so that you can help each other. Thirdly, you must be careful everywhere and try not to cause accidents. If you do this, you will surely enjoy your travel.

这是一篇提纲类作文，文章的要点基本上都给了出来，考生只需要翻译清楚即可，难度不大。在写作的时候也不能逐字逐句的翻译，要运用合适的连接词把要点串联起来，形成一个整体。选择词汇的时候要选择相对高级的词汇，也要运用多种句型，让文章更有变化。写作中注意应用一些比较经典的句式短语等来提高作文的文采，注意不要遗漏要点。为了使表达更有逻辑性，适当使用序数词，连接词等。

据专家权威分析，试题“阳光英语杂志征稿，要求根据下列提示信息写一篇80词左右的旅游方..”主要考查你对  提纲作文  等考点的理解。关于这些考点的“档案”如下：

提纲作文

考点名称：提纲作文

• 提纲作文：
  即是对作文要求中有提纲限定或叫做提纲提示,要求作文内容中包括提纲内容的一种作文形式。

• 提纲作文注意：
  1. 仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。
  2. 提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，
     按照一定逻辑关系来写。
  3. 根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。