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书面表达10% 以Great changes in my Hometown 为题，按下列提示要求写一篇80词左右短文，介绍自己家乡的变化。 过去  生活贫困，房屋破旧阴暗；污染严重，垃圾遍地。道路窄 游客很少。 现在 住房宽敞，明亮；现代学校，许多人有小车，孩子可接受教育，空气更新鲜；交通方便：游客每年有几万。我的感受是希望记住过去，展望未来是很重要的。 注意：1文中不得出现具体地名，开头已给出，不几入总数。 2 词汇：traffic 交通； convenient 方便的；pollution 污染; rubbish 垃圾； The changes in My hometown                                                 In the past ，my hometown was very small.

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The Changes in My Hometown In the past ,my hometown was very small, people lived a poor life ,The houses were old and dark .pollution was very serious ，and there was rubbish everywhere .the roads were narrow and traffic was not convenient , so few visitors came here . Now great changes have taken place in my hometown .people are living in many tall buildings ,.what’s more, There are many modern schools and children can get a good education .there are trees ,flowers ,and grass everywhere ,people can see greener   mountains, cleaner rivers and bluer sky ,and their houses are larger and brighter . Many people have their own cars .every year thousands of people tourists come to my hometown for a visit. I’m sure my hometown will become better and better ,I think It is important to remember the past and dream about the future.

试题分析：本题要求写一篇关于介绍自己的家乡变化的短文。本文所给材料比较详细。写作中注意将家乡过去和现在的一些情况介绍清楚，并描述自己对将来的展望。结合材料可知本文时态人称问题比较复杂，涉及过去，现在和将来三种时态，注意时态与时间状语的搭配问题及主谓一致问题。写作中注意使用连词，序数词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误，写好后反复读几遍，适当修改。 【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如: take place发生；what’s more而且；thousands of成千上万的；it is……to do sth做某事很重要等。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用, 让文章更出彩。

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