题文

如今，旅游已经成为人们喜爱的一项活动，请你根据以下提示写一篇短文，向大家介绍一下你所熟悉的一名旅游爱好者的基本情况以及他(她)的一次旅行经历。 提示： 1. What’s his/her name?   2. What’s he/she like?  3. How often does he/she travel? 4. Where did he/she travel to?  5. What did he/she do? 注意：1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2.词数：80左右。

题型：写作题  难度：中档

答案

Travelling My friend Lily is a travelling lover. She is tall and always has a sweet smile on her face. She travels to foreign countries with her parents once a year . This summer vacation,she went to Korea with her parents and sister.They went there by Korean Air and really enjoyed themselves on the plane.It took them 3 hours to get there.Things were fine in Korea.They stayed in Korea for 5 days.They visited many places of interest.Besides,they bought many special products,such as pickles，seaweeds and so on.In short,this is an unforgettable trip.

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。本文作者以熟悉的一名旅游爱好者的基本情况以及他(她)的一次旅行经历,介绍情况用一般现在时，讲述旅行经历用一般过去时。 【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，例如has a sweet smile on her face,enjoyed themselves, places of interest.,such as,and so on,in short, by air等短语; 固定句型It took them 3 hours to get there; 文章层次清晰，表达流畅。

据专家权威分析，试题“如今，旅游已经成为人们喜爱的一项活动，请你根据以下提示写一篇..”主要考查你对  提纲作文  等考点的理解。关于这些考点的“档案”如下：

提纲作文

考点名称：提纲作文

• 提纲作文：
  即是对作文要求中有提纲限定或叫做提纲提示,要求作文内容中包括提纲内容的一种作文形式。

• 提纲作文注意：
  1. 仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。
  2. 提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，
     按照一定逻辑关系来写。
  3. 根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。