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学生会要表彰一批优秀学生，Tom想推荐他的同学John竞争最乐于助人奖(Most Helpful Student Award)。请以Tom的名义给学生会主席写一封推荐信。词数约80，不包括已给出的开头和结尾。 推荐信中必须包括下列要点：John 1、有礼貌，勤奋，乐于助人，常帮助同学学习 2、聪明，记忆力好，学东西很快 3、经常为希望工程募集物品，照顾老年之家的老人 4、电脑用得好，经常为帮扶俱乐部(the Helping Hands Club)从网上获取资料 5、上周，一个小男孩迷路，John将他送回家，男孩的父母很感激他。 Dear Sir I would like                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                We will be glad if he can win the award. Thank you Yours faithfully Tom Best wishes for you!  Hope to see you soon!

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Dear Sir I would like  to recommend John for the Most Helpful Student Award. He  is polite, helpful and often helps with our lessons. Besides that, he is clever and learns things well. He often cares the elderly. He is good at Computer and can look for things on the Internet for the Helping Hands Club. Last week, a boy lost his way. John sent him home so the boy’s parents were grateful to him.         We will be glad if he can win the award. Thank you Yours faithfully Tom Best wishes for you!  Hope to see you soon!

试题分析：这是一篇推荐信，学生会要表彰一批优秀学生，Tom想推荐他的同学John竞争最乐于助人奖(Most Helpful Student Award)。请以Tom的名义给学生会主席写一封推荐信，所以要用第一人称来写。需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数80左右，不要太多也不要太少。 点评：本文属于书信类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。

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