题文

为了使同学们更加健康快乐地成长，学校决定向同学们征求建议。假如你是王波，请用英语向校长写一篇建议信。 内容包括： Suggestions for a Better School Life 学校 老师   ﹡常开放图书馆 ﹡组织更多课后活动 ﹡给予我们更多的运动时间 ﹡少组织考试 ﹡﹍﹍ ﹡让课堂更有趣 ﹡课堂上说得更简单明了一些 ﹡准时下课 ﹡布置少一点作业 ﹡﹍﹍ 作文要求： 文中应包含所有要点，并适当发挥。语句连贯，80词左右。 不能在作文中出现真实的校名和姓名。作文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear headmaster, I’m very glad to write a letter to you. These days we are talking about how to have a better school life. Here are some of my suggestions. First, I hope our school will                                                                                                  Hope my suggestions will be helpful. Thanks for reading my letter! Yours sincerely, Wang Bo

题型：写作题  难度：中档

答案

Dear headmaster, I’m very glad to write a letter to you. These days we are talking about how to have a better school life. Here are some of my suggestions. First, I hope our school will open the library more often. Second, I think our school can organize more after-class activities. Next I hope our school will give us more time for sports, art and music. And I suggest our school should organize fewer exams as well. As for our teachers, I hope they will be our friends and make classes more interesting. And if they can talk less but more clearly in class, we will be more interested in studying and have more time to practice. What’s more, I hope they will give us less homework and finish classes on time. Hope my suggestions will be helpful. Thanks for reading my letter! Yours sincerely, Wang Bo

这是一封建议信，开头结尾已经给出了，就把要点写全就可以了，要点是以表格的形式给出的，所以审题时，表格是重点，表格分两部分，一是给校长的建议，还有是给老师的建议，要用学过的句型表达清楚，除了列出的建议，还要求学生自由发挥写出建议，要求比按要点写更难点，要求用自己的语言组织。还要注意使用一些关联词，使文章更连贯。象这篇范文里的，first，second，next，what’s more。

据专家权威分析，试题“为了使同学们更加健康快乐地成长，学校决定向同学们征求建议。假..”主要考查你对  提纲作文  等考点的理解。关于这些考点的“档案”如下：

提纲作文

考点名称：提纲作文

• 提纲作文：
  即是对作文要求中有提纲限定或叫做提纲提示,要求作文内容中包括提纲内容的一种作文形式。

• 提纲作文注意：
  1. 仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。
  2. 提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，
     按照一定逻辑关系来写。
  3. 根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。