题文

根据以下有关Alan 的个人情况的介绍， 用英文写一篇介绍他的短文。词数： 80 左右。 Name: Alan Brown Age : 16 Appearance: tall , round face, short hair Personality: generous , humorous Address : 69 Park Road, Sydney; live with his parents School: No. 4 High School Nationality ( 国籍 )： Australian Occupation ( 职业 ) ： student Favourite subjects: Art, Music Weekday activities ( 活动 ) ： swimming and walking Usual Saturday activity : having parties Usual Sunday activity : watching TV His dream: be a social worker

题型：写作题  难度：中档

答案

Alan Brown is an Australian student at the age of 16 in the No. 4 High School. Before he came to China, He lived with his parents at 69 Park Road, Sydney. He is tall and has a round face and short hair. He is so generous and humorous that we all like him. His favourite subjects are Art, and Music. His dream is to be a social worker. During weekdays, he often goes swimming and walks with his friends after school.He usually has parties to make friends on Saturdays while he just stays at home to watch TV on Sundays .

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。主要写Alan Brown的年龄、外貌、性格、爱好以及他的日常活动。全文以一般现在时为主。 【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短词为文章增色不少，例如at the age of，during weekdays,go swimming, after school ,make friends , on Saturday ,on Sunday 等短语；运用了不定式做表语，如His dream is to be a social worker；运用了状语从句，如 Before he came to China; 运用了并列句，如He usually has parties to make friends on Saturdays while he just stays at home to watch TV on Sundays 。文章整体内容饱满，条理清晰，表达流畅。

据专家权威分析，试题“根据以下有关Alan 的个人情况的介绍， 用英文写一篇介绍他的短文..”主要考查你对  提纲作文  等考点的理解。关于这些考点的“档案”如下：

提纲作文

考点名称：提纲作文

• 提纲作文：
  即是对作文要求中有提纲限定或叫做提纲提示,要求作文内容中包括提纲内容的一种作文形式。

• 提纲作文注意：
  1. 仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。
  2. 提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，
     按照一定逻辑关系来写。
  3. 根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。