题文

目前中学生早餐问题已经引起社会关注，你所在学校的学生会在5月20日“全国学生营养日”开展问卷调查，其结果令人担忧。请你根据调查结果写一篇短文，倡导营养早餐。(regularly, active, junk food(垃圾食品), a balanced diet, as a result) 学生比例 早餐情况 健康状况 55% 有规律地吃早餐 身体健康，精力充沛 25% 吃垃圾食品 营养不均衡 20% 没有吃早餐 感到饥饿，上课无法认真听讲，容易生病 Breakfast Is Important Breakfast is important. But not all the students have realized its important. Here’s the result of our survey. About 55 percent of the students  ________________________ _______________________________________________________________________

题型：写作题  难度：中档

答案

Breakfast Is Important Breakfast is important. But not all the students have realized its importance. Here’s the result of our survey. About 55 percent of the students have breakfast regularly every day. They keep healthy and look active. 25 percent of them just have junk food intstead. They don’t have balanced diet. It is had for their health.20 percent (of the students) go to school without breakfast. As a result, these students often feel hungry in class and can’t listen to teachers carefully. What’s more, they get ill easily.

It’s necessary /important  for us to have breakfast and we should also have the right kinds of food for breakfast. 试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。本文主要写早餐的重要性，通过三组数据分别对规律吃早餐、吃垃圾食物和不吃早餐上学的情况对比，得出早餐的重要性，全文用一般现在时。 【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，例如keep healthy, look active.balanced diet,55 percent of,25 percent of,20 percent,As a result,in class,listen to,What’s more; 固定句型如It is had for their health，It’s necessary /important  for us to have breakfast .文章层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。

据专家权威分析，试题“目前中学生早餐问题已经引起社会关注，你所在学校的学生会在5月2..”主要考查你对  提纲作文  等考点的理解。关于这些考点的“档案”如下：

提纲作文

考点名称：提纲作文

• 提纲作文：
  即是对作文要求中有提纲限定或叫做提纲提示,要求作文内容中包括提纲内容的一种作文形式。

• 提纲作文注意：
  1. 仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。
  2. 提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，
     按照一定逻辑关系来写。
  3. 根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。