题文

习近平总书记说：“实现中华民族伟大复兴，就是中华民族近代以来最伟大的梦想。”作为中学生，我们也应该有自己的梦想。请说说你的梦想以及你将怎样实现你的梦想。 要求：1.题目自拟； 2.语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺； 3.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校； 4. 80词左右。

题型：写作题  难度：中档

答案

My Dream Everyone has his dream. My dream is to be a doctor. When I was in Grade Seven, I was sick and often went to see doctors. The doctors were very friendly to me and they often cheered me up. With the help of them, I was getting better. Now I’m very healthy. Since then I have hoped to become a doctor. In order to achieve my dream, I will study hard. I’ll give my love to the patients as much as possible and help them out of danger. To be a doctor is really great. I think my dream will come true one day.

试题分析：这是一篇激发学生们谈自己梦想的一篇作文，由习近平总书记的话导入话题，让学生有梦想并付诸行动去实现梦想，因为谈自己的梦想，所以应该用第一人称写，不仅叙述自己的梦想还得写出如何实现梦想。 【亮点说明】短文用了一些短语和固定句式，为文章增色不少，如：The doctors were very friendly to me and they often cheered me up. With the help of them, In order to achieve my dream, I will study hard. I’ll give my love to the patients as much as possible and help them out of danger.等，本文涉及到一般过去时、一般现在时及一般将来时等，语句连贯，梦想贯穿整篇文章。

据专家权威分析，试题“习近平总书记说：“实现中华民族伟大复兴，就是中华民族近代以来最..”主要考查你对  提纲作文  等考点的理解。关于这些考点的“档案”如下：

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