题文

假设你是李明，你的笔友Peter来信谈到他所居住的城市，并希望了解你家乡无锡的情况，请你用英语写一封回信。内容提示如下： 无锡位于中国东部，由诸如惠山区（Huishan District）、锡山区等6个区组成； 因太湖(Tai Lake)而出名，过去许多工厂经常向湖里倾倒废弃物； 最近政府已经采取措施减少污染，…… 每天我们都能看到一大群游客；每年来无锡的最好的时间是春天； 5. 我希望…… 注意： 短文须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯； 第3和5要点内容共须用2～3句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥； 词数80个左右，短文的开头和结尾句已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Peter, It’s very kind of you to write to me and let me know about your beautiful city. Now I’d like to tell you something about my hometown Wuxi. ____________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Li Ming

题型：写作题  难度：中档

答案

Dear Peter, It’s very kind of you to write to me and let me know about your beautiful city. Now I’d like to tell you something about my hometown Wuxi. Wuxi lies/ is in the east of/ eastern part of China. It is made up of six destricts such as Huishan Destrict and Xishan Destrict. It is famous for Tai Lake. Many factories used to put its waste into the lake./ In the past, many factories put its waste into the lake. Recently the government has taken action to reduce pollution. (Wuxi has become one of the most beautiful cities.) Every day we can see a huge army of / a large group of/ …visitors here. The best time to visit Wuxi is (in) spring. (I hope you can come and visit soon. I’ll show you around it. I’m sure you’ll have great fun.) I’m looking forward to hearing from you. Yours   Li Ming

试题分析：本文是一篇提纲作文。题目所给要点比较详细。我们要用准确的语句把每一个要点都表达出来。要做到语句通顺，意思连贯。也可以适当发挥，但一定要围绕主题。本文主要以第三人称书写。介绍过去受污染用一般过去时，介绍政府已采取措施用现在完成时。 【亮点说明】It is made up of six destricts such as Huishan Destrict and Xishan Destrict. It is famous for Tai Lake. Many factories used to put its waste into the lake.这几个句子写得非常好。

据专家权威分析，试题“假设你是李明，你的笔友Peter来信谈到他所居住的城市，并希望了解..”主要考查你对  提纲作文  等考点的理解。关于这些考点的“档案”如下：

提纲作文

考点名称：提纲作文

• 提纲作文：
  即是对作文要求中有提纲限定或叫做提纲提示,要求作文内容中包括提纲内容的一种作文形式。

• 提纲作文注意：
  1. 仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。
  2. 提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，
     按照一定逻辑关系来写。
  3. 根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。