题文

北京阳光中学九年级学生Simon目前学习成绩不理想，他写信给青少年辅导员Sigmund Friend，倾诉困惑，寻求帮助。假设你是Sigmund Friend, 请根据所给的信息，完成一封给Simon的回信，内容要点如下： Simon’s problems 在学习数学、英语方面有困难；现在想要提高但不知道怎么办。 Your suggestions 仔细计划好时间：当你计划你的一周时，你应该把你不得不要做的事列出一个清单来。 充分利用好课堂时间：课上听好老师所讲的一切；适时记好笔记，它是一种学习的好方法。 培养对待考试的良好心态：考试的目的在于考查你对一门科目学到了什么;即使考得不够好也不必太忧虑;下次取得进步更为重要。 …… Your expectation 希望你的答复对Simon有价值。 注意： 1. 书信须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯； 2. 建议部分的第4个要点内容须用1～2句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥； 3. 词数80个左右，已给出的句子，不计入总词数。 Dear Simon Thank you for your letter. You say that ________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ You probably think you will never be a top student. This is not necessarily so, however. Anyone can become a better student if he or she wants to. Here’s how. Plan your time carefully. When you plan your week, you should make a list of things that you have to do. Make good use of your time in class. _________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ Develop a good attitude about tests. _________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ I hope my answers will be valuable to you. Best wishes Sigmund Friend

题型：写作题  难度：中档

答案

Dear Simon Thank you for your letter. You say that you have difficulty/difficulties/problems with English and Math. Now you want to improve them but don’t know what to do. You probably think you will never be a top student. This is not necessarily so, however. Anyone can become a better student if he or she wants to. Here’s how. Plan your time carefully. When you plan your week, you should make a list of things that you have to do. Make good use of your time in class. Listen to everything the teachers say in class. Take notes at the right time. It’s a good way of learning. Develop a good attitude about tests. The purpose of a test is to show what you have learned about a subject. You don’t need to worry too much even if you haven’t done well enough in tests. It’s more important to make progress next time. Also, you can find a good place to study. … I hope my answers will be valuable to you. Best wishes Sigmund Friend

试题分析：本题要求给Simon写一封信，给他一些建议帮他解除困惑。根据所给要点写一篇80词左右的英语短文，而且要做到表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯。根据所给要点可知，本文主要以一般现在时态书写，可以用第二人称。一定要注意把每一个要点都表达出来，不要遗漏任何一个，并且要围绕主题适当发挥，再给几点建议。 【亮点说明】该文条理清晰，语句通顺，表达了每一个要点。

据专家权威分析，试题“北京阳光中学九年级学生Simon目前学习成绩不理想，他写信给青少年..”主要考查你对  提纲作文  等考点的理解。关于这些考点的“档案”如下：

提纲作文

考点名称：提纲作文

• 提纲作文：
  即是对作文要求中有提纲限定或叫做提纲提示,要求作文内容中包括提纲内容的一种作文形式。

• 提纲作文注意：
  1. 仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。
  2. 提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，
     按照一定逻辑关系来写。
  3. 根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。