题文

上周一班会课我们班就“我的梦想”进行了一次热烈的讨论，学生们发表了各自的看法。 Tom 健康的饮食, 多运动，有强健的体魄来… Kate 环境好，污染少，生活在一个鸟语花香的世界，… Mary 有一天能乘飞机去香港旅游，因为香港是购物天堂，… Millie 有足够的时间玩自己最喜欢的教育游戏，在玩的同时学习英语和地理… 你自己 … 要求：1. 要点齐全，可适当增加细节使句子通顺、连贯。 2. 最后一点要展开合理的想象，不少于2点。 3. 词数80左右，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 My dream Everyone may have his own dream. Someone may want to be rich, someone may want to be beautiful, and someone may want to have power. Last Monday, we had a warm discussion about this topic at the class meeting. Here are different opinions. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________                                                          __                                          __ When thinking of these things, we realize that we are full of life and hope.

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答案

My dream Everyone may have his own dream. Someone may want to be rich, someone may want to be beautiful, and someone may want to have power. Last Monday, we had a warm discussion about this topic at the class meeting. Here are different opinions. Tom would like to have an healthy diet and more exercise. He wants to own a strong body so that he can be a volunteer to help people in need. In Kate’s opinion, her dream is to live in a beautiful and less polluted world. If she can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing around, she will be full of joy. Mary hopes to fly to HongKong to do some shopping one day because HongKong is a wonderful place to go shopping. Millie is interested in educational computer games. So she wishes to play computer games and learn something about Geography and English at the same time. My dream is to study abroad one day. I really want to make more friends and learn more about the world. When thinking of these things, we realize that we are full of life and hope. All of us believe that our dreams will come true if we try our best.

试题分析：本书面表达是以my dream为题的写作，所以文章的时态应该是将来时；在题目中提到了一些人的梦想，所以在表述时，应该紧扣提示；而对于“我”的梦想应该是与前几人的不同。书写时应该注意语言的连贯，表达的地道，注意连词的运用和文章的层次。 【亮点说明】本文层次分明，语句通顺，时态运用准确。对不同人的梦想的表述都很明确，紧扣提纲。连词和插入语的运用较恰当，如so that，In Kate’s opinion，so等；特别是一些句型和短语的运用较好，如would like to，hope to，wish to以及if 引导的条件状语从句等。 考点：

据专家权威分析，试题“上周一班会课我们班就“我的梦想”进行了一次热烈的讨论，学生们发..”主要考查你对  提纲作文  等考点的理解。关于这些考点的“档案”如下：

提纲作文

考点名称：提纲作文

• 提纲作文：
  即是对作文要求中有提纲限定或叫做提纲提示,要求作文内容中包括提纲内容的一种作文形式。

• 提纲作文注意：
  1. 仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。
  2. 提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，
     按照一定逻辑关系来写。
  3. 根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。