题文

安全是我们成长中最需要关注的话题。作为一个即将毕业的初三学生，请根据图中所提示的几个方面，以“Safety First”为题对即将入学的初一新生提一些建议。 要求： 1．词数90左右，文章开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 2．条理清晰，语义连贯，句式规范，字迹工整。 3．文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息。 Safety First Dear friends, it is very important for us teenagers to be safe from danger both at home and at school. There are many things to be taken care of. _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ Please always remember, 'Safety first'. Thank you.

题型：写作题  难度：中档

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Dear friends, it is very important for us teenagers to be safe from danger both at home and at the school. There are many things to be taken care of. When you are at school, always remember to wait in line because you are living in groups. Never jump the queue or push yourself into others. You should also avoid playing silly tricks on others especially when you are having after-school activeities. The traffic is getting worse nowadays. Both car drivers and walkers should pay more attentions to the traffic signs and other rules. Never cross the road when the light is red. You should also eat healthy food at the school and home. Eat fewer snacks and exercise more. It is also a good idea to be friendly to others and stay with some friends wherever you go. Please always remember, ‘Safety first’. Thank you.

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。 写出顺序的词来表达文意更清楚。完成提示词时也要符合事实。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。 【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。 考点：

据专家权威分析，试题“安全是我们成长中最需要关注的话题。作为一个即将毕业的初三学生..”主要考查你对  提纲作文  等考点的理解。关于这些考点的“档案”如下：

提纲作文

考点名称：提纲作文

• 提纲作文：
  即是对作文要求中有提纲限定或叫做提纲提示,要求作文内容中包括提纲内容的一种作文形式。

• 提纲作文注意：
  1. 仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。
  2. 提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，
     按照一定逻辑关系来写。
  3. 根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。