This is my pen friend，what about yours?

题型：填空题  难度：中档

答案

One possible version： I am very glad to introduce my pen friend Peter to you. He was born on August 23 1997. He has a round face and a long nose. He wears a pair of glasses because of working on the computer too much at night. He is strong and healthy. Every day he eats much fruit and many vegetables. What’s more, he seldom eats junk food. He is generous and helpful. He often gives his seats to people in need on the bus. He is also kind. He always treats animals kindly. His dream home is far away from the city. It’s close to the sea. This is my pen friend , what about yours?

试题分析：本篇书面表达应根据提纲内容介绍笔友的年龄外貌性格品质，饮食及梦想。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。 【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，准确运用时态。文章衔接连贯，运用了because of，what’s more等连词进行衔接。同时，本文中运用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如:in need, far away from, close to等。

据专家权威分析，试题“假设下面是你的笔友Peter的一些信息。请根据下面内容，写一篇短文..”主要考查你对  提纲作文  等考点的理解。关于这些考点的“档案”如下：

提纲作文

考点名称：提纲作文

• 提纲作文：
  即是对作文要求中有提纲限定或叫做提纲提示,要求作文内容中包括提纲内容的一种作文形式。

• 提纲作文注意：
  1. 仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。
  2. 提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，
     按照一定逻辑关系来写。
  3. 根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。