题文

英语中有一句谚语：Failure is the mother of success.生活中我们常常会遭遇失败，但只要能正确对待，往往会获得最后的成功。请就此用英语写一篇短文，主要内容包括： 1．描述亲身经历的一次失败； 2．叙说失败后如何获得成功； 3．谈谈你的感想。 注意：1．词数90左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数； 2．短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺； 3．短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 Life is full of ups and downs and it is never too easy to achieve success. As the English saying goes, "Failure is the mother of success." _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________

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Life is full of ups and downs and it is never too easy to achieve success. As the English saying goes, "Failure is the mother of success." I was asked to play in a table tennis match last term. Before the match, I was cinfident that I would win. However, I failed . How sad I was! luckily, my PE.teacher helped me out. He told me not to lose heart. He also helped me with my skills. With his help , my confidence returned and I came up with several new ideas. The next day, though I had to play against anther more skilled boy , I beat him! So don’t be afraid of failure. If we can deal with it well. failure can be the mother of success!

试题分析：这是一篇提纲式的给材料作文。要求介绍介绍失败的经历，及从中的收获和感想。描述经历用过去时态。 【亮点说明】这篇短文条理通畅，能将要点表达完整。句式丰富，能运用连词使文章更有逻辑同时运用了大量的短语。

据专家权威分析，试题“英语中有一句谚语：Failure is the mother of success.生活中我们..”主要考查你对  提纲作文  等考点的理解。关于这些考点的“档案”如下：

提纲作文

考点名称：提纲作文

• 提纲作文：
  即是对作文要求中有提纲限定或叫做提纲提示,要求作文内容中包括提纲内容的一种作文形式。

• 提纲作文注意：
  1. 仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。
  2. 提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，
     按照一定逻辑关系来写。
  3. 根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。