题文

当今社会，浪费和奢侈消费变得越来越严重，为创建文明城，珠海市启动了“节俭生活，从我做起”行动，请你写一篇以 “Saving”为题的80字以上的短文。 内容包括： 1、你对节俭的看法。 2、在生活中你看到了哪些不节俭的行为。（至少两件） 3、列举两件以上你在生活中做过的有关节俭的事。 4、号召大家参与到节俭活动中来。 Saving Zhuhai government has called on the citizens to do something for saving so that we can enjoy our happy life. We middle school students should do something for it. In my opinion I think      ___________________________________________________                                       __ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________                                              _

题型：写作题  难度：中档

答案

In my opinion, I think saving is our Chinese traditional ethic which we should develop. Saving is good for us to solve the problem of energy shortage. And it can make us support ourselves and learn to arrange our lives. In our daily life, we can see different kinds of wasting. For example, some students waste food in school canteen. Some students often forget to turn off the electricity when they leave the classroom. Others even don’t turn off the tap after washing their hands. As for me, I am trying my best to keep saving. When I go shopping, I use cloth bags instead of plastic bags. And I go to school on foot or ride bikes instead of taking my parents’ car. Besides, I save water and food in my everyday life, and try to recycle the energy. In a word, saving is very necessary and important. We should keep saving as possible as we can. I hope there will be more and more Zhuhai citizens to keep saving from every little thing. On the other hand, we should fight against the phenomenon of wasting and build an energy-saving society.

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文，所给提纲要点清晰，要求明确，话题内容贴近学生生活实际，考生有较大的发挥空间。动笔前要认真审题，勾勒要点，并适当发挥。行文中要注意人称、时态的变化及主谓一致问题。同时注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。 【亮点说明】这篇短文涵盖了题目要求的所有要点内容，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在文章的结构组织上很好地使用了简单句和复合句，使文章自然流畅。同时，使用了大量的固定句式和短语，如：In my opinion、be good for sb to do sth、make sb do sth、for example、forget to do sth、turn off、as for、try one’s best to do sth、instead of、in a word、as possible as we can、more and more、On the other hand、fight against等，这为文章增色不少。学习中注意积累，牢记一些常用句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

据专家权威分析，试题“当今社会，浪费和奢侈消费变得越来越严重，为创建文明城，珠海市..”主要考查你对  提纲作文  等考点的理解。关于这些考点的“档案”如下：

提纲作文

考点名称：提纲作文

• 提纲作文：
  即是对作文要求中有提纲限定或叫做提纲提示,要求作文内容中包括提纲内容的一种作文形式。

• 提纲作文注意：
  1. 仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。
  2. 提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，
     按照一定逻辑关系来写。
  3. 根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。