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我市是一个海滨旅游城市，每年夏天接待大量的外国游客。学校学生会决定招聘部分志愿者在暑假期间为外国游客服务。 假若你是李华(16岁，九年级十一班），希望参加这次志愿活动，既帮助别人，锻炼自己，又能提高自己的英语能力。 请根据所给提示，用英文回复下面的招聘启事。 注意内容 1.包括应聘的条件、目的及打算；          2.不要出现你的真实姓名和学校名称； 3.邮件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；  4.词数:80左右。 Volunteers Wanted Serving for the foreign visitors during the summer vacation. Outgoing; Excellent spoken English ；Know about some western culture Those who are interested in this activity, please send your email to studentunion@ 163. com before June 14th, 2014 for an applying. Student Union Dear Sir/Madam， I am interested in becoming one of the volunteers. I'm looking forward to your early reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua

题型：写作题  难度：偏难

答案

Dear Sir/Madam, I am interested in becoming one of the volunteers. I'm Li Hua，a girl of sixteen years old, from Class 11， Grade 9. English is my favorite subject, and I can speak English very well. What's more，I know some customs of some foreign countries. As an outgoing girl, I'm getting on well with my classmates and teachers. I really like to meet all kinds of people. To be a volunteer, I can not only help others but also help myself，because I can have a good understanding of the world. I believe I can get much knowledge and working skills from helping others. Besides, it can improve my English and it's quite helpful for my future life. If I am accepted, I'll try my best to do it well. I'm looking forward to your early reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua

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