题文

书面表达（15分） 学会感恩，是我们每个人一生中的必修课。三年的初中生活就要过去了，你最想向谁表达你的感恩之情？ 请以“Thanks, my__________________"为题写一篇80词左右的英语短文。 要求： 语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺；文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；80词左右。

题型：写作题  难度：中档

答案

Thanks ,My Parents Thanks,my father and mother,thanks for your love and care.Since I was born fifteen years ago,you have given me your deepest love and care.You bring me up, help me with my homework in school days and take me to the park for fun during the weekend.You help me develop good habits and personality.You tell me again and again to be a good man in the future.It is you who have great influence on me in my life.You are not only my parents but also my good friends.I have made great progress both in my study and virtue over the past few years.

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。本文作者写对父母的感恩，列举了父母对他的关心与爱。全文主要用一般现在时态。 【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，例如thank for, bring up,help with,again and again,in the future, have great influence on, not only... but also,made great progress,both... And,over the past few years等短语，文中还用到了时间状语从句 Since I was born fifteen years ago；定语从句 who have great influence on me in my life. 文章层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。

据专家权威分析，试题“书面表达（15分）学会感恩，是我们每个人一生中的必修课。三年的初..”主要考查你对  提纲作文  等考点的理解。关于这些考点的“档案”如下：

提纲作文

考点名称：提纲作文

• 提纲作文：
  即是对作文要求中有提纲限定或叫做提纲提示,要求作文内容中包括提纲内容的一种作文形式。

• 提纲作文注意：
  1. 仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。
  2. 提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，
     按照一定逻辑关系来写。
  3. 根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。