题文

假如昨天下午全校师生进行了一次地震逃生演练（a practice of escaping from an earthquake）。请展开合理想象，写一篇短文介绍这次演练的情况。不少于60词。 提示词：under the desk, cover the head, run out, one after another (一个接一个), walk on the right down the stairs (楼梯), get to (到达)。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________

题型：写作题  难度：中档

答案

One possible version: Yesterday morning, our school gave us a practice of escaping from an earthquake. All the teachers and students took part in the activity. Before it, our head teacher , Miss Wang, told us the rules for escaping again. It started on time at 8:00 a. m. Miss Wang shouted,“Under your desk!”All the students stayed under the desks with arms covering the heads. Next, she shouted“Group One, go!”… “Group Two, go!”…. My classmates ran out of the classroom one after another. When I was walking on the right down the stairs, Lucy in front of me fell down suddenly. I held her up quickly. All of my classmates got to the playground at 8:01. No one was left.“We only spent one minute.”said Miss Wang happily. This activity is popular with both parents and students. We learnt a lot from it.

试题分析：本文要求根据所给中文提示语，写一篇不少于60字的短文。适当展开合理想象，写一次地震逃生演练，介绍演练的情况。所以要用第一人称、一过去在时。 注意语句扩展，行文连贯。 【亮点说明】本文要点齐全、行文连贯。运用了一些非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，如take part in, on time, one after another. is popular with,并注意了句子之间的衔接如Before it,Next,等。

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