李明是个很聪明的学生，住在北京，但他有一些不好的习惯，请你根据下面提供的信息，用英文写一篇短文，并针对他存在的一些问题提出合理的建议。学习情况北京阳光中学，七年级-七年级英语-00教育-零零教育信息网

李明是个很聪明的学生，住在北京，但他有一些不好的习惯，请你根据下面提供的信息，用英文写一篇短文，并针对他存在的一些问题提出合理的建议。学习情况北京阳光中学，七年级-七年级英语

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李明是个很聪明的学生，住在北京，但他有一些不好的习惯，请你根据下面提供的信息，用英文写一篇短文，并针对他存在的一些问题提出合理的建议。

学习情况		北京阳光中学，七年级一班，擅长地理和历史
外貌		个子不高，大眼睛，短发，戴眼镜，总是穿运动鞋，因为轻便舒适
	喜欢	唱歌、玩电脑游戏，两餐间喜欢吃零食
	不喜欢	游泳、跑步，吃蔬菜
其它情况		常去他家前面的购物中心，离他家不远，是一个见朋友的好地方
建议		至少两条

具体要求：
1. 不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，字迹工整。
3. 内容必须包括以上所有要点，不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥。
Li Ming is a clever student. He lives in Beijing. He is at Beijing Sunshine Middle School.______


He likes singing and ______________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________

He often goes to

I think _________________________________________________________________________

题型：写作题难度：中档

答案

Li Ming is a clever student. He lives in Beijing. He studies in Beijing Sunshine Middle School.
He is in Class 1, Grade 7. He is good at Geography and History. He isn’t tall. He has big eyes and short hair. He wears glasses. He always wears trainers because they are light and comfortable.
He likes singing and playing computer games. He likes having snacks between meals, but he doesn’t like eating vegetables. He also dislikes swimming and running.
He often goes to the shopping mall in front of his home. It’s not far away from / near his home. It’s a good place to meet friends.
I think he must change his lifestyle. He should eat more vegetables because they are good for his health. He also needs to do some exercise like playing basketball and running in his free time.

试题分析：考查提纲类书面表达：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
【亮点说明】范文中出现一些常见短语：is good at 擅长做某事likes singing 喜欢做某事in front of 在。。前面far away from 与。。很远are good for对。。有好处。He always wears trainers because they are light and comfortable这个句子中becaue连接两个因果关系的句子。He likes having snacks between meals, but he doesn’t like eating vegetables.这个句子中but表示转折。He also needs to do some exercise like playing basketball and running in his free time.这个句子中need是个实义动词需要，need to do 需要做某事，like是介词表示象。。，and连接playing,running并列，所以时态保持一致。