题文

下周你要和你的家人去北京，不能照看你的小狗，请你写一封信给你的好朋友Tom，让他帮你照顾你的小狗。请他做到以下事情： 1 每天喂狗三次 2 要经常给它水喝 3 要经常带它去散步 4 注意保持它的房间干净整洁 ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________

题型：写作题  难度：中档

答案

Dear Tom, I’m glad to tell you that I will go to Beijing with my family next week for a holiday. But I can’t look after my dog during the holiday. Could you please help me to take care of it? It is a very lovely dog. You need to feed the dog three times a day. I will prepare the food for you. It needs to drink water several times a day. After supper, would you mind having a walk with it for a while? It likes to walk every day. And its room must be clean and tidy. It’s very kind of you if you can look after it. I think the dog can also bring you happiness. Li Hua

试题分析：这是篇命题作文。作文是以书信的形式，所以要注意书信的格式，包括称呼和署名等。作文里要包含题目中所给的要点，不能有遗漏。各信息之间可运用一些承接的词句，包括使用连词等，来加强文章的逻辑性。 【亮点说明】这封书信格式正确，要点齐全，表述准确流利。文中使用了一些非常实用的句型和短语，例如：I’m glad to tell you that I will go to Beijing with my family next week for a holiday我很高兴告诉你下周我和家人去北京度假；that引导了一个宾语从句。Could you please help me to take care of it?你能帮我照顾它吗？would you mind having a walk with it for a while?你介意带它出去散会步吗？这两个句子都是征询别人意见的句子。

据专家权威分析，试题“下周你要和你的家人去北京，不能照看你的小狗，请你写一封信给你..”主要考查你对  提纲作文  等考点的理解。关于这些考点的“档案”如下：

提纲作文

考点名称：提纲作文

• 提纲作文：
  即是对作文要求中有提纲限定或叫做提纲提示,要求作文内容中包括提纲内容的一种作文形式。

• 提纲作文注意：
  1. 仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。
  2. 提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，
     按照一定逻辑关系来写。
  3. 根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。