题文

青少年杂志社邀请你参加每年度的中学生写作竞赛，请以“My American friend” 为题，根据所给信息完成下面的小短文。 要求：要点齐全，书写工整。 Looks 明亮大眼睛，长长的直发 Personality 幽默，讲滑稽笑话使人发笑，乐于助人，在公交车上让座 School life 所有科目中最喜欢法语，觉得学外语其乐无穷，有大量的时间进行课外活动 A travel experience 上周，乘飞机12个小时抵达北京 参观一些名胜古迹，了解许多中国文化 A DIY job 昨天，她和我一起装饰我的卧室，把墙涂成蓝色，张贴一些美丽的图画，安装明亮的灯。我们合作得很愉快。                            My American friend Suzy is my American friend.____________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________

题型：写作题  难度：中档

答案

My American friend Suzy is my American friend. She has big bright eyes and long straight hair. She has a good sense of humour. She often tells funny jokes and always makes people laugh. Among all the subjects, she likes French best, she thinks learning foreign languages is fun. In the school, she has lots of time for after- school activities. Last week,it took her twelve hours to get to Beijing by plane. She visited some places of interest and learn a lot about the culture of China /Chinese culture. She also likes doing DIY. Yesterday ,she decorated my bedroom with me. We painted the walls blue, put up some beautiful pictures and put in a bright light in my bedroom. We had fun working together.

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。本文作者主要介绍自己的一个美国朋友的外表、个性、旅行经历等。全文主要用一般现在时态和一般过去时态。 【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，例如sense of humour，tells jokes, lots of after- school activities.,lplaces of interestast week,learn about,a lot, likes doing,put up had fun working等短语，文中还用到了宾语从句 she thinks learning foreign languages is fun.；固定句型it took her twelve hours to get to Beijing by plane. 文章层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。

据专家权威分析，试题“青少年杂志社邀请你参加每年度的中学生写作竞赛，请以“My Americ..”主要考查你对  提纲作文  等考点的理解。关于这些考点的“档案”如下：

提纲作文

考点名称：提纲作文

• 提纲作文：
  即是对作文要求中有提纲限定或叫做提纲提示,要求作文内容中包括提纲内容的一种作文形式。

• 提纲作文注意：
  1. 仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。
  2. 提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，
     按照一定逻辑关系来写。
  3. 根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。